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7 Awful First Sentences That Are Killing Your Outreach Emails

Hubspot Sales

Bonus: That gives you the perfect segue into your next line: “Usually, when companies move into new territories, they need to get boots on the ground as soon as possible … ”. Wrong: " I’ve been thinking about your recent acquisition of Darby Apparel, and … ". Right: "Your acquisition of Darby Apparel on Friday got me thinking … ".

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